Thursday, 18 August 2016

Sam the tiger

Ohce upoh a time there was a tiger called sam and he lived in a forres.Ohe day he  went to the forres to hunt a rabbit to feed his baby.First he sprlnted to a hill where the rabbit lived he jumped on a rabbit and killed it for his babu tiger was happy.Fihally he took the rabbit home to his baby

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jermaine, it's Danielle here in the year 7&8 block. Hey great writing about Sam the tiger, hey maybe one day you can write another story about Sam the tiger just like a chapter book. Hey some advice, go over your story and check if it makes sense and has full stops and capital letters. Keep it up.