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Saturday 29 June 2019

 One day There was a mysterious house in the mountain. And there was a bunny
living in the house that is stuck in the  mountain. Were there was some people
walking up the mountain and they saw a medium sized bump in the ground and
it looked mysterious and they were knocking on the window.And all they saw was
a bunny and they ran back down to get shovels and they started to dige the house
up from the ground  and the bunny was getting scared. case his house wild be gone
so he put on a jason masked and they got scared of the jason marcked and the bunny
was so relieved. That they went away so he can have more rest from the humans and
he can live in peace from those unrespectful humans.

Taoro; hi jermaine i like how your story ended because  the bunny was peaceful that's
how i like it good job jermain you might be an author

1 comment:

  1. hi jermaine its tumanako you are pretty good at writing but you forgot to add a title you might have to come back and do that well bye hope you fix it

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